Revolutionary reedition[]
Please assure me Captain Dournet on the position of CO, BCD 51, is deduction, not a direct proof (quotation) (as well as HMS Irrestible in first division) - I suggest such supposition should be revealed in references
Question - why "Squadron flagship", and "Division flagship" phrases should be started with capital letter?
Comment - information concerning cruisers classes is lost.
--dotz 08:03, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
Explanation of my changes[]
...if not selfexplaining:
- at least some two digit divisions numbers were mentioned in BCR 5 as well as in other BCRs, so such way of numbering is at least equally right to one digit numbering; IMO it is much easier to identify it like eg. BCD 51 (battlecruiser division fifty one) than I/BCR 5 (first division of the battlecruiser squadron five); (this is Honorverse with hazy rules established by wrighters, real-word kownledge is supportive tool only; way of numbering you suggested origins from real-world land units organization I suppose)
- your clear "four divisions scheme" don't cover initial phase of BCR 5 history (squadron in statu nascendi). Status during servce in HFleet is much improved now I hope (I think better idea is to describe changes in organization within whole squadron frame, than at divisions sections).
- we don't know all members of staff, Moreau inherited it, so it should be extracted from your time divisions.
--dotz 08:03, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
What exactly ships were heavily damaged in Hancock?[]
It seems not Nike, while she was able to be sent out.--dotz 08:21, 30 August 2009 (UTC)
Seniority[]
HH was junior tp six of the seven other BC captains. HH3--dotz 15:25, November 3, 2009 (UTC)